Lines of separation
Her pale back curves a smileshape between t-shirt and jeansas she stretches to a high shelf.Unconscious of her graceand forgetful of the lovingly drawn black lines thatslip into view below the hemto...
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*smiles* This one manages much in a little, seems appropo to the subject. Very well done Valoe.PoThe wolf howled under the leavesAnd spit out the prettiest flowersof his meal of fowl:Like him I...
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Thank you Po, so glad you liked it - this one didn't come easy "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and the thought finds...
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gotta admit this one made me chuckle, valoe ... as it brought back the memory of my mother's reaction when she saw my first tattoo. you've crafted a vivid portrait with this ... and the brevity works...
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Thank you Beth - it is always so pleasing to get a chuckle of recognition "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and the...
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What a lovely piece, Valoe! - so much said, so economically written, so wittily expressed. Makes me wish I had a daughter! Davie
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Thank you Davie - so glad you enjoyed the read "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the thought and the thought finds the words." -...
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Not something I'm looking forward to seeing...whether it be the ink, or the line of a thong...they grow up so fast, don't they? Well expressed...and instantly recognisable! Every new beginning comes...
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Too soon the time passes us bywhen our words held any sway.Suddenly the world is theirs alonewe are then just a bit part in their play..Bravo ~V~Tal
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Thank you Paul and Tal - so pleased you like it And I know you're pleased you have sons Tal!"A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness...It finds the...
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You've got another chuckle here too, only I'm hoping not to see it on my daugher.Suzanne
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Thank you Sherry and Suzanne I am sorry I am late saying thank you - I have net access problems and am waiting for my phone line to be fixed."A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong,...
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Another mom says...wonderful...but my daughter better NOT...I love this Valoe...well penned!
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Thanks for reading, Gala, and for the kind words.There are lots of things we say that they better not - but in the end, they will be who they are "A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of...
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